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Invisible Teather by MarianasABeaner Invisible Teather by MarianasABeaner
"When you love someone like I loved her, they're a part of you; it's like you're attached by this invisible tether and no matter how far away you are, you can always feel them. And now every time I reach for that tether I know there's no one on the other end and I feel like I'm falling into nothingness.It feels like piece of me has been ripped off. Just one more time I want to hold her. Ten more secondsó is that too much to ask? For ten more seconds to hold her? But I can't and I won't, so for now, I'm just gonna miss her"

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This is so how I feel.
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Jez123 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Writer
Aww, that was such a sad moment when he read this for her, and I totally get hows this feels, because when my love - who is just my friend - was out of my life for even a few months, and I knew she was still ten minutes up the road, I felt like my whole world was falling apart. And that's really saying something about when she's just...y'know...gone.
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MarianasABeaner Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
I understand
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CrazedByCalliope Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012   Writer
A lovely expression. Often emotional poetry is too cliche, or forced out in the moment. This is well done!
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tamakiluv95 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww :huggle:
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HeadFullOfRainbows Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
its beautiful
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5ninjasonastickynote Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am so sorry that you know how this feels.... I am right there with you. And if you ever wanna talk about anything...I am here.
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MarianasABeaner Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Aww thank you
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5ninjasonastickynote Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. I just...know that it hurts like hell and you just want even a few seconds but know that you have to let her move along and do her own thing.... So I wasn't kidding when I said I will be here if needed even though I don't know you.
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Musicmorgan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awe im sorry :/
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MarianasABeaner Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Yea it sucks
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